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书面表达瓶颈之一克服“中文式英语”的嵌入 很多高三同学在面对高考难度与要求的书面表达的时候，显得捉襟见

 

书面表达瓶颈之一克服“中文式英语”的嵌入  很多高三同学在面对高考难度与要求的书面表达的时候，显得捉襟见肘，觉得自己写的文章很好，为什么不能得高分呢？我也曾经看到过这样的作文，它们都有个共同点就是：有中文式英语的嵌入。

我们讲中文式英语，不是像我们所说的纯的中文式英语，即按照中文的句子结构，一字一字的翻译而我在这里所表达的中文式英语的嵌入，是我们同学们在平时写作文时没有使用固定的句型，到考试现场现编是不可能突破书面表达这个瓶颈的。

那么如何去克服中文式英语的嵌入呢？多年的高中英语教学经验告诉我，高分作文，即20分以上的作文，除了具备能带来视觉美感享受的优美的书法、能体现考生深厚语言功底的高级词汇、复合句和非谓语动词等特点外，一定少不了起到画龙点睛、妙笔生画作文的经典句型。

大家都知道写作提分的三要素有句型、连词和高级词汇，那么句子是我们写作文最大的单位有了漂亮的句子，用好的连词将其连句成段，再加上一些如星星般亮点的词汇的点缀，一篇好的高考英语作文就有了而这三个要素中最容易把握的就是句子，所以希望大家能够将写作的重心放在句型上，因为这个是最容易把握的。

一般来说，在一篇100个词左右的书面表达中，我们不提倡缘木求鱼、画蛇添足式的复杂结构和套句但数量适中，运用恰当和内容有机结合的经典的句型往往有事半功倍的效果，也会让阅卷老师对于我们的书面表达刮目相看所以我们讲使用好正确或者高级的句型，在高考英语写作中至关重要的。

【话题八：旅游和交通】118.Travel is a way to broaden our horizons, through which we can learn about different cultures of the world and enlarge our knowledge.

旅游能开拓我们的视野，通过旅游，我们可以了解世界上的不同文化并扩大知识面119．Instead of having a travel agency arrange our accommodations, we booked the train tickets and hotel rooms on the Internet by ourselves.。

不用旅行社安排我们的住宿，我们自己在网上订了火车票和宾馆120．Having claimed my luggage, I hurried to the exit, where Jack was anxiously waiting for me.。

认领行李之后，我匆忙向出口走去，杰克在那里焦急地等我121．In the days that followed, we paid a visit to some famous scenic spots such as Big Ben and London Eye. They were such magnificent places that we couldnt help having many photos taken there to record the memories which were really worth cherishing.。

在接下来的几天里，我们游览了大本钟和伦敦眼等一些著名景点这些地方如此华丽，我们情不自禁地在那里拍了许多照片，留下值得珍藏的记忆122．By the end of last year, another new gymnasium had been completed in Beijing.。

到去年年底，另一个体育馆在北京建成了123．On returning home, I couldnt wait to share the photos and experiences with my classmates.。

一回到家，我迫不及待地与同学们分享照片和经历124．Soon afterwards, we were sent to different families, where we tasted traditional English food, exchanging our ideas happily on familiar topics. 。

不久，我们被派往不同的家庭，在那里我们品尝了传统的英国食物，对熟悉的话题愉快地交换看法125．It is different kinds of foods and snacks that give you the chance to experience abundant Chinese food culture.。

各种各样的食物和小吃让你有机会体验中国丰富多样的饮食文化126．What makes it distinguish from other resorts is that it is rich in natural resources and primitive forests. 。

与其他景区不同的是这里有大量的自然资源和原始森林127．The splendid scenery of sunset on the beach will definitely leave a deep impression on you.。

海滩壮观的日落景色一定会给你留下深刻的印象128．Besides, it is dizzying for you to get a view of colorful lakes and breathtaking waterfalls, which causes you to have a sense of walking into a fairy tale.。

此外，观看多彩的湖泊和令人惊叹的瀑布让你眼花缭乱，宛若走进童话世界129．All in all, it fully deserves to be listed in 5A­grade places of interest. 。

总之，它完全可以被列为5A级的名胜130People prefer to choose high­speed trains because they move very fast, thus shortening the travelling time.。

人们更喜欢选择高速列车，因为它们行驶的速度非常快，缩短了旅行时间131．Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large­scale construction of roads, there is still much room for improvement,  because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. 。

交通问题由多种因素引起尽管大规模地修建公路，但由于这些年来车辆的不断增加，(交通问题)还有很大的改善空间132．The problem is that they have to get up earlier in order not to be trapped in the traffic jam. At the same time, they have no choice but to stay at work at noon until late in the afternoon, by which time the traffic will become easier. 。

问题是他们不得不早点起床以免遭遇堵车同时，他们别无选择只好中午待在单位，一直到下午下班，那时交通压力将会有所缓解【话题九：文娱与体育】133.In addition to improving creativity, learning music will be useful to children throughout their lives.。

除了提高小孩的创造力外，学习音乐使小孩终生受益134．I like the music which sounds good for me, no matter what style of music it is.。

我喜欢那些听起来令我很舒服的音乐，无论它是哪种类型的135．Learning a musical instrument will help your children develop concentration, patience and perseverance.。

学习一种乐器将帮助你的孩子培养注意力、耐心和毅力136．The Literature Society recommended a variety of good books, encouraging us to get pleasure out of reading.。

文学社推荐了各种各样的好书，鼓励我们获得读书的乐趣137．It was only when I reread his poems recently that I begin to appreciate their beauty.。

在我重读他的诗歌的时候，我才开始领会它们的美138．Some of us think that Senior 3 students should take exercise after school because theyre convinced that progress or success depends on good health, while the others hold quite different views.。

我们中一些人认为高三学生课余时间应该参加体育锻炼，因为他们坚信进步或成功依赖健康的体魄；而另一些人持截然不同的观点139．There is no doubt that running does good to our health. It is not only a good way to build up our strength but also helps us relax and relieve the pressure of learning.。

毫无疑问跑步对我们的健康有好处，它不仅是强身健体的好方法，而且有助于我们放松心情，缓解学习压力140．Having realized the importance of doing sports, most of us begin to take a series of effective steps, thus bringing some positive changes.。

意识到进行锻炼的重要性，我们当中的大多数人开始采取一系列有效的措施，由此带来了一些积极的变化141．In my opinion, doing sports is good for my health, with the advantage of strengthening my body and keeping the illness away.。

我认为做运动对我的健康有好处，不仅可以让我强身健体，还能让我远离疾病142．Of all the sports, I like table­tennis best. I hold the view that it is not only a sport but also an art, because it is a game that needs strength and skill.。

在所有运动中，我最喜欢乒乓球我认为它不仅是一项运动，而且是一门艺术，因为它是一项力量和技巧并用的运动143．Sports are flourishing in China now. Of various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.。

现在运动在中国很盛行在各种运动中，我尤其喜欢慢跑144．Recently our school held a basketball game between teachers and students to improve the relationship between us. It turned out to be an unforgettable experience.。

最近我们学校举办了一场师生篮球赛，目的是改进师生关系结果证明这是一次难忘的经历145．It is strongly recommended that the school should give students more free time to take part in sports activities, because as the old saying goes: “The body is the capital of the revolution.” 。

强烈建议学校给学生们更多的自由时间参加体育活动因为常言道：“身体是革命的本钱”【话题十：节假日活动】146.With Mothers Day approaching, we decided to hold a family party to celebrate the important day.。

随着母亲节的临近，我们决定举办一场家庭晚会来庆祝这个重要的日子147．As Teachers Day is drawing near, some of my classmates and I had a group meeting, where we had a heated discussion on how to celebrate it.。

随着教师节的临近，我和班里一些同学开了个小组会议，就如何庆祝教师节进行了热烈的讨论148．The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read “Happy Teachers Day。

！” 黑板上装饰着漂亮的字，写着“教师节快乐！”149．Walking into the classroom, Ms Li was  surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers Day

！”李老师走进教室，惊讶地发现我们站成一排，鼓着掌并大声地说“教师节快乐！”150．When the video was eventually shown to everybody on Teachers Day, our teachers were moved to tears.

教师节那天，当视频最后被播放的时候，我们的老师感动得流下了眼泪151．Moreover, you will have a chance to learn how to make dumplings, which is a typical Chinese custom, where I believe you are sure to have great fun.。

另外，你们将有机会学习如何包饺子，这是一个典型的中国习俗，我相信你们一定会从中感受到快乐152．During the Spring Festival, red lanterns and Spring Festival couplets are used to decorate a house, presenting a festive atmosphere.。

在春节期间，人们用红灯笼和春联装饰房子，呈现出节日的气氛153．The children are looking forward to receiving lucky money, playing happily with each other, and setting off fire­works excitedly.。

孩子们盼望着收到压岁钱，一起高兴地玩耍，兴奋地放烟火154．In the street appear the dragon and lion dance and some other carnival activities, while the grand Spring Festival Gala held by CCTV is what you cant miss.。

大街上有舞龙、舞狮和其他一些狂欢活动，而中央电视台举办的盛大的春节联欢晚会是你不能错过的155．Then came the grandest dinner time when we shared the homemade sweet dumplings. We chatted happily, enjoying the family togetherness.。

然后到了最美好的聚餐时间，我们分享家里制作的汤圆我们高兴地畅谈，享受一家人团聚的时刻156．After the dinner, we went to the park to appreciate the beautiful lanterns, the highlight of this Lantern Festival. Two huge dragon lanterns especially caught our eyes and we couldnt help flashing our cameras.。

晚饭后，我们去公园欣赏美丽的灯笼，这是元宵节的亮点所在两条巨龙灯特别引人注目，我们情不自禁地拍照157．Tomb Sweeping Day falls on April 5th or so every year, when people can do something special according to the tradition.。

清明节一般在每年的4月5日左右，那天人们根据传统做些特别的事情158．On the one hand, they can sweep the tombs for the dead. On the other hand, they can go for a walk in the country in spring when the grass has just turned green.。

一方面，人们可以为逝者扫墓另一方面，人们可以去乡间踏青159．Im glad that you have great passion for Chinese traditional festivals, especially the Dragon Boat Festival. Now, Id like to share some details with you.。

我很高兴你对中国的传统节日尤其是端午节非常感兴趣现在，我愿意和你分享一些(相关)细节160．You know, every festival has its own typical food, and the Dragon Boat Festival is no exception. Eating zong zi, boiled rice wrapped by reed leaves, is what you cant miss.。

你知道，每个节日都有自己的传统食品，端午节也不例外吃粽子，一种由粽叶包的蒸熟的大米，是你不能错过的161．The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time when the whole family enjoy the full moon together.。

那一晚的月亮在整个阴历月内是最亮的我们最喜爱的是一家人一起赏满月的时刻162．With the bright moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat mooncakes and fruits, sharing our stories.。

皓月当空，我们围坐在一起，吃着月饼和水果，分享往事163．March 12th is Tree Planting Day, which is memorable because our class had an unforgettable experience on that day.3。

月12日是植树节，那天值得纪念，因为那一天我们班有一次难忘的经历164．Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.。

下周六重阳节期间，我想邀请你和我们一起去拜访附近的养老院【话题十一：世界与环境】165.Lets make our joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment。

！让我们为创造一个绿色和谐的环境共同努力！166．As far as Im concerned, I am in favor of recycling used textbooks because only by doing so can we help to save lots of natural resources.

就我而言，我赞成回收利用旧课本，因为只有这样做，我们才能帮助节约大量的自然资源167．We can find us in an exciting world every day, with the sun shining brightly, green trees growing well and flowers coming out in different colors.。

我们每天都能发现自己处于一个令人兴奋的世界里，阳光灿烂，树木青翠，百花齐放168．I was appreciating the beautiful lake when a scene that didnt go with its harmony came into my eyes.。

我正在欣赏漂亮的湖，这时与美景不协调的一幕映入了我的眼帘169．Its high time that we should protect our environment from being polluted.。

该是我们保护环境不受污染的时候了170．We are very proud of ourselves, believing we can make more contributions to a better world.。

我们为自己感到自豪，相信我们会为更好的世界做出更多的贡献171．Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show, with the theme of environmental protection.。

我们校摄影俱乐部将要举办国际中学生摄影展，主题是环境保护172．I make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation.。

我急切呼吁采取措施应对这一状况173．Our government is sparing no effort to take measures to fight against pollution.我们的政府正努力采取措施与污染作斗争。

174．Only in this way can we live in comfortable and beautiful surroundings.只有用这种方法我们才能生活在舒适、美丽的环境中175。

．Better living conditions can really be reached on condition that the environment is well protected.只有保护好环境，才能真正拥有更好的生活条件。

176．It is OK to leave an electrical appliance on so long as you are using it—if not turn it off！只要你在使用电器，你可以让它开着，如果不用就关掉它。

177．Even if we start reducing the amount of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases, the climate is going to keep on warming for decades or centuries.

即使我们开始减少二氧化碳和其他温室气体的含量，在未来几十年或几个世纪内，气候仍会持续转暖178．The terrible pollution has done great harm to us as well as to the surroundings.。

严重的污染已经给我们还有环境带来了很大的危害179．It is a pity that many people dont realize the importance of environmental protection.。

遗憾的是，很多人意识不到环境保护的重要性180．How important it is for us to keep the balance of nature and protect the environment。

！对于我们来说，维持生态平衡和保护环境是多么重要啊！181．I believe if everyone is devoted to protecting the wetlands, the wetlands can be well preserved and we can enjoy a more harmonious environment.

我认为如果每个人都致力于保护湿地，湿地能得到很好的保护，我们能够享受更加和谐的环境182．If there are no natural reserves, it is likely that more animals will become extinct.。

如果没有自然保护区，很有可能更多的动物将要灭绝183．We should make the public aware that everyone should and can do something to deal with environment problems.。

我们应该让公众知道每个人应该而且能够做些事情来处理环境问题184．It is a shame to throw rubbish around.乱扔垃圾是可耻的【话题十二：科普知识与现代技术】185.We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cellphones and the Web are widely used.。

我们现在生活在一个电视、手机和网络被广泛应用的信息时代186．If I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cellphone or cut off the Internet.。

如果要放弃其中之一的话，我将选择关闭电视而不会关上手机或切断网络187．As is known to us, smartphones have become an important part in our daily life. We need them to chat, to surf the Internet as well as entertain ourselves.。

众所周知，智能手机已成为我们生活中重要的一部分我们用手机聊天、上网、娱乐188．But the problem is that a number of middle school students are growing increasingly addicted to phones.。

但是问题是许多中学生沉迷于手机189．It goes without saying that modern technology brings us convenience and comfort in life.。

毫无疑问，现代科技给我们的生活带来方便和舒适190．They came to the conclusion that not all things can be done by a computer. 。

他们得出结论，不是所有的事情计算机都可以做191．A cellphone can make me keep in touch with my friends and family while the Internet can provide me with almost all information.。

手机能让我与朋友和家人保持联系，同时网络可以提供给我几乎所有的信息192．They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.。

他们有助于我们更好地理解理科知识，激发我们对科学发现的好奇心193．Most importantly, the wide use of it has brought us more convenience in our lives.。

最重要的是，它的广泛应用已经给我们的生活带来了更多的便利194．It is the widespread use of Alipay that saves us the trouble of taking cash.。

支付宝的广泛使用为我们省去了带现金的麻烦【话题十三：社会热点】195.Many of the traffic accidents caused by drunk­driving have brought about traffic jams, injuries and even death.。

许多醉酒驾驶的交通事故已经造成了交通堵塞、受伤、甚至死亡196．There is no doubt that it will have a great effect on all the relevant countries and contribute to the economic and cultural development of the world. 。

毫无疑问这将对相关国家有很大影响，促进世界的经济和文化的发展197．At present, our government has put forward “The Belt and Road” initiative, which encourages cooperation between China and other countries.。

目前，我们政府提出了“一带一路”倡议，这能激励中国与其他国家的共同合作198．Only if the whole nation unites together in the face of difficulty and danger, nothing can defeat us.。

只要全国人民团结起来一起面对困难和危险，没有什么能打倒我们199．No sooner had I reached home than it began to rain.我刚到家就开始下雨了200．With great determination and perseverance, she commits to helping the blind and deaf children

，which makes a great contribution to the charity.凭着巨大的决心和毅力，她全身心地帮助盲聋儿童，为慈善事业作出了重大贡献201．Individuals and units shall shoulder responsibilities to classify garbage according to the waste categories of recyclable, hazardous, wet, and dry.。

个人和单位应按照可回收垃圾、有害垃圾、湿垃圾、干垃圾将废弃物进行分类202．The city aims to have trash sorting programs in all of its residential neighborhoods by 2020.。

这座城市将在2020年底之前在所有居民区实施垃圾分类回收【话题十四：中国传统文化】203.Knowing that you are interested in the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest which was organized by our school, I am very pleased to tell you more details about it.。

得知你对我校举办的古诗词朗诵大赛感兴趣，我非常高兴告诉你详细情况204．Since this event is designed to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture, the staff, all the students as well as anyone interested in it are welcome. 。

既然这项活动的目的是为了帮助更多的人了解中国的传统文化，欢迎职员、学生及所有人感兴趣的参加205．You can write about your understanding of Chinese culture as well as your personal experience in China.。

你可以写你对中国文化的理解也可以写你在中国的个人经历206．There is no doubt that Chinese characters play an important role in passing on the Chinese language and culture. 。

毫无疑问汉字在传承中国语言和文化方面起着重要作用207．Tang poetry, a Chinese traditional style of literature, is considered as a mirror reflecting the rise and fall of Tang Dynasty. 。

唐诗，中国传统文学的一种，被认为是反映唐朝兴衰的镜子208．With a long history of more than 2,000 years, Chinese kung fu is regarded as a traditional sport gaining more and more popularity.。

中国功夫有着2 000多年的悠久历史，被认为是一项越来越受欢迎的传统运动209．It is a fantastic chance/opportunity for you to feel the beauty and unique charm of Chinese culture.。

对于你来说，这是一个绝好的机会去感受中国文化之美和其独特的魅力210．I am more than delighted to learn that you are extremely interested in Chinese classical literature and I would like to recommend the book Journey to the West to you.。

我很开心地了解到你对中国经典文学很感兴趣，我想向你推荐《西游记》这本书211．The family has been an integral part of the social order since the very beginning of Chinas cultural development and extends its impact to the present day.。

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